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RE: Honeypot Defintion - Almost There!


From: "Lobur, Julia M" <jlobur () state pa us>
Date: Fri, 23 May 2003 13:00:27 -0400

Something like this:
"A honeypot is an information system resource that's 
value lies in improving understanding of unauthorized 
or illicit use of that resource"

You may want to consider replacing the personal pronoun 
"whose" with that's. The pronoun is still a bit awkward.

How about "the value of which"?

- Julie -


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